Page From Book I'm Writing, The Adventures Of Elizibeth Jane Summers
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Danni Allen, Grade 6
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Short Story
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2016
Life is good, it seems normal. Not a care in the world until you enter mine...
Hi, I’m Elizabeth Jane Summers but you can call me Lizi. I attend Moly High School. To be honest, I'm a sorta weird at my school, but I just assume no one likes me because I arrived at this school last year in the middle of the year, so I guess I'm a bit of an alien to them... Anyway, my first day hmmm... Let’s see... HORRIBLE!!! Why? Oh yeah, just got called a ranger 50 billion times!!! And to top it all, I got the worst teacher of all time, Mrs Mary Cruzooa! For some reason everyone is under her trance and likes her, but I sense something dodgy about her...
Guess what, I got to school today and found out Mr Henry is dead! Dead? MR HENREY! Shot dead in his apartment. No-one knows who did it or why, which means it’s a new case to solve! I forgot to mention, I'm a Detective! Well kinda...
I solved a few cases at my other school, like who stole the Principal’s ring or where is Rosa’s sock, but never something like this. It’s bit scary how a teacher got murdered, don't cha think. Let alone a teacher who taught the class next to me...
Ok, I have reason to believe that Mrs Cruzooa killed Mr Henrey! I caught her red handed today and she was holding a gun and her lame excuse was, ‘I found it in the closet and didn't know what it was dear.’
REALLY? I don't think so Mrs I killed Mr Henrey and it’s soo obvious!! I'm thinking about telling the police. I know I’ll go to her house and find the gun that killed Mr Henrey. Ok bad idea, I get it, but I’ll do it anyway...
I’m in her house under the staircase. WHY WHY WHY did I do this? She is right outside the door eating dinner, so I'm stuck here till 7! Oh well, on the up side, I just found a secret passage...
You are not going to believe what I am seeing. Gun everywhere! Knives! I'm getting scared and I think I'm just gonna... what’s that noise? Oh crud, she's coming down here. Where do I hide...
I'm under a table listening to Mrs Cruzooa sharpen a knife. I am going to die. I know it. Just when I'm about to give up hope, she gets a phone call. “WHAT! don't do it till I say! @%$$ I’ll be right over!”
Good news, I'm not going to die! As soon as I hear a car leave, I get out from the table and get the heck out of that place!
I enter school still thinking when to tell the police, so I did it then. I told them everything. They didn't even consider it. They just said stop being silly.
Mary Cruzooa is a murderer and I know it! But no one believes me...
To be continued...