Jack And Jill Are In Trouble

• Liam Murphy, Grade 6
• Short Story
• 2016

“Where is he?!” said Jill “In room 4 Jill
And please hurry” said the nurse. Jill ran to room 4 and said “How is he Doc?” in a western accent. “Well Jack has a problem, a big problem” said Dr Victor. “Well what’s the problem?” said Jill “He has Crown Syndrome” said Dr Victor “Really that’s the best name you can think of?” said Jill annoyed “The surgery cost $10,000” said Dr Victor sadly. “SURGERY, $10,000!” Jill said as she fainted.
“Agh where am I?” said Jill, she was sitting on a chair next to Jacks bed. “Ahhh you’re awake Jill! Please have some tea” said Dr Victor “Umm no thanks. Did I fall asleep?” said Jill “No you fainted but I have good news! Jack apparently didn’t have Crown Syndrome he just got a concussion; by now he should have woken up” said Dr Victor “Agh where am I? Jill is that you?” said Jack “HE IS AWAKE!” Jill and Dr Victor yelled.

And that’s the story after the Book Jack and Jill.