The Dog And The Party

• Gabrielle Elali, Grade 5, St John Vianneys Primary School
• Short Story
• 2016

Excellence Award in the 'Top Secret 2016' competition

Once upon a time there was a family and a cute puppy
the puppy's name was called Angie.She was an English Staffy she was having a great time with her best family.The family went to pet barn and bought Angie a bed and some dry food.It was dinner time for Angie
she had eaten dry food and she ate very fast!.It was time she went to bed and the family had close the windows and close everything and the whole family went to bed.It was morning Angie had milk and oats for breakfast.The family had breakfast and ate eggs on toast they love that they like have it almost everyday.It was time Angie went to the vet and got her shots.When she went to the vet she was very excited and was jumping on people and was racing to have her shot first and she was scared at the same time.it was she had to take her shot she walked in sat on the seat and was crying tears dropping on the seat and when she took the shot she was happy again.Angie jumped into the car with the window open sticking her face out and opens her tongue in the air.When Angie arrived at home she was so tied she can't move one step and she fell onto the floor.The family had an invite to go to an Easter party there was a pool and a BBQ. The party had a dog it name was April and i was cute.Angie went into the car and hoped in and as soon as they arrived they were happy and the rang the door bell.The person open the door and said" hello" welcome to my parry hope you enjoy.They were very excited to go in and Angie was happy too.Once upon a time there was a family and a cute puppy
the puppy's name was called Angie.She was an English Staffy she was having a great time with her best family.The family went to pet barn and bought Angie a bed and some dry food.It was dinner time for Angie
she had eaten dry food and she ate very fast!.It was time she went to bed and the family had close the windows and close everything and the whole family went to bed.It was morning Angie had milk and oats for breakfast.The family had breakfast and ate eggs on toast they love that they like have it almost everyday.It was time Angie went to the vet and got her shots.When she went to the vet she was very excited and was jumping on people and was racing to have her shot first and she was scared at the same time.it was she had to take her shot she walked in sat on the seat and was crying tears dropping on the seat and when she took the shot she was happy again.Angie jumped into the car with the window open sticking her face out and opens her tongue in the air.When Angie arrived at home she was so tied she can't move one step and she fell onto the floor.The family had an invite to go to an Easter party there was a pool and a BBQ.