What A Mess!

• Ellie Arkam, Grade 4, Jarrahdale Primary School
• Short Story
• 2016

Excellence Award in the 'Top Secret 2016' competition

Once on a summer morning me and my best friend had a sleepover at my house. We both woke up and then saw a huge mess on the ground i asked "Who made this incurably huge mess" I whisped to my friend. "I thorte we where making a joke" i said.

Then i new who made the mess...MY FRIEND because she normally makes messes in my room.I asked her nicely "Did you make this mess"I politely said. But she said a werid way"Why would you make this enormouse mess"I said strangly said in my head."I know you you made it because you usely make messes at mine"So i said.Then I yelled and said "You clean the mess up now" But guess what happend i yelled that she started to clean it up but i helped to.
Then she finally started to be a lot cleaner but she still makes a lot of mess but im use to it now.Inow make a little bit of mess now but i clean it up after me but still she is my best friend.