Tragic Weekend
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Cody Deicmanis, Grade 6, Pleasant Street Primary School
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Short Story
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2016
Excellence Award in the 'Top Secret 2016' competition
BOOM CRASH BANG! I could hear something heavy vibrating pass my hut. I looked outside and there was a dangerous terrifying giant boulder, it was scary but let's get back to when it all started.
Saturday morning: Hi, my name is Dylan, I have one brother and two sisters. Their names are Samantha, Chelsey and my brother’s name is Ricky. We all have pure blonde hair. I don't like them but yes I kind of have to have.
I also have a best friend Jake, we like the same things and we do everything together. We both live on the beach. Today we went looking for fantastic and beautiful sea shells. We had a little splash at the beach pretty much every day, except if it's stormy, today was fun I said to Jake “I'm looking forward to tomorrow “ he replied back me too.
Sunday morning: hello it's me, Dylan, again today I was hanging out with Jake, ok back to the story.
I jumped out of bed and yelled with my mightiest voice, “I'm hanging out with Jake, by the time I got out the door mum had nothing to say. By the time I got to jake's house he wasn't there his mum said he was going to your house and I said he wasn't there.
I thought to myself oooh oooooh, his mum rang my mum then they both went looking for him, I went to where we were going today and I heard screaming from the cave, it sounded like Jake’s voice. I went in and Jake was there with 5 other monsters. I grabbed him with my extremely small hands, it looked like they were gaining on him, then we ran home. I quickly grabbed the home phone and rang my mum and it all went black...