The Spooky House
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Seth Obal, Grade 6, Brunswick Junction Primary School
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Short Story
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2016
Excellence Award in the 'Top Secret 2016' competition
On a dark spooky night in a town called gloomy Ville, three cool kids thought it would be funny to throw rocks at the ghostly house on haunted hill. One of the kids called Stepheney said, “this house has been here since 1738, now it’s 2005.” “This place is really old!” Replied Wilson.
Jordi dared Stepheney to knock at the door. Stepheney crept to the door and knocked the door open and two hands dragged him into the spooky house. Jordi and Wilson were so scared they got goosebumps.
We’re not leaving without Stepheney replied Wilson. They walked in the spooky house. They saw so much doors. “Let’s go in this one”, said Jordi. “He might be in the firstone.” They open the old door… they saw zombies! They shut the door quick as they could. “Let’s go to the second one”, “No it’s a waste of time. Let’s go upstairs.” They were crawling upstairs, then they heard, “help Jordi and Wilson!” There were zombies chasing Stepheney. Jordi saw a gun on the old bookshelf; there was a note on it. It said this gun deletes scary stuff. He grabbed it and shot, ‘poof’ went all the zombies. All three kids walked a long way home. The three kids told everyone to not mess with old houses.