Mini Magnificent Mars

• Feifan Wu, Grade 1, St Ives North Public School
• Poetry
• 2017

Finalist in the 'Write Here Write Now 2017' competition

The red planet is freezing.
Hypothermia is easily caught and you can suffer.
Even though it's red it's colder than ice!
Red is one of Mars's flag colours.
Earth is the third planet and Mars is the fourth.
Dust storm also occurs on the planet that blows Martian dust!
People can't survive because of Hypothermia.
Land of Mars is as red as roses.
Aliens might live there are as green as emerald!
No liquid water can be found on the surface.
Earth's gravity is so much stronger.
The iron oxide is what give Mars its red hue!