Gabriel Moss, Grade 3
The magnificent coloured rainbow shimmers across the calm lake.
I can feel the bright yellow sun, warming me up.
I can taste the salty air from the shimmering lake.
I can smell the scent of yummy marshmallows .
I can see the magnificent lake, shimmering in the rainbow.
It is as beautiful as roses and as graceful as a swan at sunrise.
As I gazed at the beautiful lake, I said to myself, 'I will always remember this marvellous place.'