Candy Land

• Joshua Davis, Grade 5
• Short Story
• 2011

Here I am playing my ps2 in my bedroom. "JACK" calls my mum. "your chocolate muffins are ready". My mum walks into the room and gives me my giant chocolate muffin. My mum walks out of the room. My bedroom is dark and cold. I go to take a bite just as I feel a tingle in my body. Suddenly I got sucked into the muffin. I opened my eyes in pain. I just realized that I was surrounded by lollie pop trees,marshmellow ground and a giant melted chocolate flowing river. I take off all my clothes except for my undies and dive into the chocolate river. I got out about ten minutes later and dried myself.Suddenly I get sucked back up into the real world.just as I started to play my ps2 again my mum walked into the room and said "are you ok"
I responded back "yes i am fine".