GET ME OUT OF HERE!!

• Deane Ngo, Grade 6
• Short Story
• 2012

GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!
My legs shivering, my hands shaking and my face was pale white as a ghost. I couldn’t believe the day as come. Here I was, on the mountain and right now on the snow. My shaking hands grabbed the rough, long piece of string then suddenly, *FLICK...* I opened my eyes and all I saw was brown, creamy, slimy chocolate by the river , green, soft, short grass. Where was I? And how did I get here? Oh I know I’m at Mr. Willy Wonka’s chocolate factory! But how did I get here? Did I come by boat? Did I just Transported? Or that’s right, I was shot by something, it was called a sling... Sling... Sling... oh, I can’t remember, and it’s not my fault because I haven’t eaten breakfast. But anyways, I’m surrounded by all of my favourite junk food , ‘’ THANKYOU the person who shot me here ‘’ I straight away knew it wasn’t my mum, if she saw my here , she’ll kill me! And again ‘’NO THANKYOU to the person who shot me because how am I getting out of here once I’ve finished?’’ Oh yeah... how am I getting out of here...