Candy Land

• Bridie Latimer, Grade 3
• Short Story
• 2015

One day a girl named Zoe went to the park. She found a portal on the back of the tower and she jumped into it. When Zoe got out of the portal she found herself in a different place. She then found a sign that said Candy Land.
"Wow" I said. On her way she met two people called Cookie Crunch and Sugar
Lump. Zoe said "Wow, I’ve never seen a cookie and a lump of sugar alive".
"Hi" they both said to me. " I need something to eat so can I have some of this candy? ’’ I said. "Yes you can but only the candy on the ground" said
Cookie Crunch. "Yay’’ I said. "Oh that filled the spot’’ I said. "Cookie
Crunch why is it so dark here?" I said. "Because this EVIL Villain named
FLARE has started an evil army of flying monkeys" said Sugar Lump. "What, flying monkeys!" I said. While I was having a treat of popping fairy floss I saw FLARE. "Oh no. Cookie Crunch I see Flare" I said. "Oh Sugar Lump we better get out of the lolly pop forest" said Cookie Crunch. "OK" said Sugar
Lump. "Do you have a queen to stop Flare?" I said. "Yes" said Cookie Crunch.
"Her name is Queen Candy Mandy" said Sugar Lump. "Do you want me to go grab her?" I said. "No" said Sugar Lump. "Why?" I said. "Because she will kick you out of this magical world" said the two treats. "Right" I said while I was still thinking of how to defeat Flare. I then said to the two, "I’m going to defeat Flare. Do you want to come with me?" "Yes please" they both said. "We need to go now, come on" I said very angrily. So we got up to Dark
Land and I said "Flare you need to stop this right now." I said it very firmly. "No!" said Flare. "I will stop you" I said. "No you won’t " said
Flare very cheekily. At night I went out to Flare’s castle to see if she would stop this. "Hey Flare come here" I said. "No" said Flare very annoyed.
"Ok Zoe what do think you could do to stop me?" Flare said. "Have a battle"
I said. "Ok Zoe we can have a battle now" Flare said. Then when I got up to the top of her EVIL castle we had a bit of a fight. On my way to flare’s
EVIL castle I found a potion that said VERY UNLUCKY POTION! So then when we had the little fight I threw it at her and she said "NOOOOOOOO". Then as soon as she was getting hurt we all said "HOORAY, HOORAY, YAY". Then we all lived happily ever after.
THE END