Save Us Mr. Butcher

• Thomas Maximos, Grade 6
• Short Story
• 2011

It started off as a normal day in 6JC............
or so they thought. “Quickly finish your lunch
The bells about to go” Jackson explained to
Michael. “Ring, ring, ring, ring” the bell
Sounded and Jackson sprinted outside quickly
Followed by 6JC.

When they went outside Jackson and David
Were racing to the oval, David won but at a
Cost............ When Jackson got to the oval
He saw half of david’s body in the monsters
Mouth, Jackson quickly got Michael and told
Him what happend so Jackson and Michael

Rounded up all of 6JC and brought them to
The classroom. Jackson sprinted inside the
The classroom and screamed “THESE A
MONSTER! Yeah right replied Miss Churcher,
“I know what to do” shouted lachie. “Call Mr.
Butcher” so lachie grabbed Miss Churcher’s
Phone and rang Mr. Butcher. 5 minutes later
You could hear the song tonight I’m loving
You. Then someone opened the door and
Sang tonight I’m loving you, at that point you
Couldn’t see who it was. It was Mr. Butcher
He said “I was called about a monster”
“yeah last place i saw it was at the oval” replied Jackson
“ The oval we go than” explained Mr. Butcher.
So 6JC and Mr. butcher headed to the oval, on the way to the oval we saw body’s with their heads chopped off but they solderd on until they got to the oval. “ No monster here” Mr. Butcher explained.
“Hey look a tree with hair on it” said Adwar, just before anyone saw the monster, The monster ate Adwar’s head off. Mr. Butcher yelled save us Mr. butcher right I’m Mr. Butcher” so Mr. Butcher ran after him saying “Mr. Butcher chop you up.” All of 6JC watched as Mr. Butcher chased away the monster, 6JC never saw Mr. Butcher again.