I Want To Suck Your Blood

• Matthew Stevenson, Grade 6
• Short Story
• 2007

I Want to Suck Your Blood The wind rustled through the valley, suddenly BANG!!! The door to the haunted mansion had been opened by two kids by the name of Geoffrey and Tucker. Geoffrey said to Tucker “dare you to go down into the cellar’’. Tucker Squirmed but wanted to act tough said “yeah sure thing im not afraid of old man Dracula’’ Tucker replied. Suddenly the door to the cellar broke down as if someone had known what Geoffrey said. The duo squirmed in terror. Tucker said” I’ll only go down there if you come with me’’ Geoffrey squirmed but replied “yes I will’’. They went into the basement were they saw what looked liked a coffin. They looked at it and decided to open it up. Suddenly hundreds of bats flew out of the coffin, Geoffrey ran up the cellar steps until the suddenly the door closed! They were trapped in a cellar with bats, suddenly the walls grew smaller and the ceiling grew tighter. Geoffrey screamed” were done for’’ Tucker replied” not if I can help it” Tucker heroically threw himself into the wall the wall shattering, Tucker and Geoffrey both ran into the wall not knowing were it would lead them. Geoffrey said” how did you know that, that would work’’ Tucker Replied” a castle 300 years old must have some bad foundation’’. Suddenly a beastly like wolf came at them; lucky Geoffrey always carried a packet of sausages around with him. The wolf took the sausages and ate them; he was distracted long enough for the duo to escape through the door, when they got through the door a rock fell and knocked them out cold.
They awoke several hours later strapped to a chair with tools of torture, and mercy, suddenly a dark figure awoke from the shadow’s, grunting a ghastly laugh. The children squirmed and screamed but nothing happened. The dark figure was growing closer and closer until finally there was not enough room for the shadow. The children were shaking as if something terrible was going to happen suddenly, a person emerged from the shadow, he looked like he was deformed or had been burnt in an accident. He laughed as he was finding something funny. Suddenly the whole roof fell down lights began to shine then suddenly there was this voice. YOU’VE BEEN PRANKED. The duo were not sure what had happened, then they said “how did you knock us out’’? Sleeping darts my friend the rock didn’t actually hit you. The duo laughed as a sigh of relive, suddenly a presenter gave them a cheque for one free milkshake at the King of Malt milkshake and candy store. A smile came on the face of the duo. Then the presenter that’s all we’ve got tonight, tune in next week when people visit a grave. Then the lights went out and the stag got dark, screams of pain were echoing in the background then suddenly the lights turned on Got ya! Then Tucker and Geoffrey’s parents came out. Geoffrey’s mum kissed him” mum’’ he said. Then Tuckers dad said lets go out for ice-cream. Matthew Stevenson. Midland Christian School. Yr 6. Age 11. 31st of August 2007