The 2 Beautiful

• Jessica Hanna, Grade 5
• Short Story
• 2013

There were 2 horrid kids. Both beautiful girls called Talia and Taylor.Taken care of by Mrs.Louis. Even though the two girls were beautiful they acted like pigs. "Get me that straightener! I love it,I need it!!!" Shouted Talia right in front of Mrs.Louis."Ok darling just wait a minute." Mrs.Louis replied in a soft voice."Why does she get to have everything! I want that straighterner more than she does!"Taylor screamed."Patience darling,just thake a deep brea.""Im already patient I don't need you to help me with my meditating skills!"Taylor interupted. Mrs.Louis thought that her daughters were the most important thing to her that she would respect them as if they were her mum. She didn't even notice how much she was spoiling her 2 little animals. She would get so anrgy at them in her mind but as soon as she looked at them she would be clensed from all the angriness and just respect them. After years and years and years of the work Mrs.Louis had to put up with, She autually started to get sick of it. "Now that they are 13 they should get educated and start working."Mrs.Louis said to her self. "Hmm"."She thought to her self. She clicked her fingers as soon as she got her idea."Thats it, I'll send them to boarding school!"She whispered to her self.So Mrs.Louis told both Talia and Taylor to pack their bags to go to Hawaii.She was actually tricking them."Come on don't waste time we need to go!'Shouted Mrs.Louis."OK!"The 2 girls groaned.Mrs.Louis was telling them that you have to pass this big school to go to Hawaii. "You are just going to stay in a small room together. No complaints."OK!!!"They screamed. So they entered the room and stayed for a long time. They heard bells ring and they were given uniforms.For them this was hell!!!! They started to get used to their new life and actually got kinder and got friends.THE END