Jack Fros!

• Zac Zborovsky, Grade 4
• Short Story
• 2013

Hi my name’s Jack fros!
Most people go on normal holidays, like on an airplane or in the car. I went on a submarine to the Atlantic, my submarine burst from pressure, the current carried my wasted corpse throughout the creepy, disgusting Atlantic Ocean.
I was reborn as I got lifted up to the icy surface through a hole in the thin ice. My eyes started to slowly open, I saw a glowing staff floating in front of me. I picked it up and banged it on a nearby tree, a huge sparkling snowflake started to form mysteriously on the old unapproachable tree! I was amazed but very confused as the dry, rotten, alarming wind lifted me off the ground and carried me to a nearby village. I tried to ask where I was but the people just kept on walking, I turned around and a kid walked straight through me! I asked myself some questions, “can they hear me? Or see me?
How do I know my name you might ask? Well the man on the moon told me that was all he ever told me, (sigh). I walked over to a place I knew very well, it was Jamie’s house, a remarkable glow red house with wonderful shimmering clean windows. Today was his birthday, even though he couldn’t see me I still had to get him a present. As I flew up to his window I wondered what I was going to get for him. I suddenly clicked! I looked through his window. He was lying on his bed looking at his new shoes. I started to draw a picture of a bunny on his window, then I made it jump out and bounce on mid-air! 3 seconds after that I made it explode causing Jamie’s room to snow!
One tiny snowflake landed on Jamie’s small nose. I just jumped inside and Jamie turned around, “Jack… Jack. Fros!”! Jamie said excitedly, ‘that’s my name… he said my name” I said confused. ‘wait can you hear me”? I asked, Jamie opened his eyes widely and answered.”Ahu,”Jamie said excitedly. “Can you see me? I asked. “Ahu” Jamie said excitedly, as we walked out to get ice-cream, we got trapped in an alley way! “Jack I’m scared,” Jamie wallowed, “ahahahahah” Shadow yelled like a mad man, a dark evil Shadow that lurks in abandon alley ways until finally, someone comes along. “don’t be scared… we’re gonna have a little fun! I said confidently, I picked up a snowball and trough it at Shadows face! ”Ahhh” screamed Shadow as he wiped snow of his face. He noticed we were gone, “stays hear Jamie” I said heroically as I flew off towards Shadow. (For reasons we are not allowed to show you the following scene.) “How dare you have fun in the presence of Shadow?” Shadow yelled loudly as Jamie and I had a snowball fight.
But just like me Jamie walked straight through Shadow.