The First Day
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Peter Van Oploo, Grade 5
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Short Story
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2014
On the 1st day the Lord created the Earth. Like a Magician He put good in it. But where ever there is good there will always be EVIL spirits. The Earth was attacked by servants of the sin. In the moment of need Jesus came for the rescue. Because of you Jesus people are sorry for what they did.
You are a hero like me. But the people will still die. If they look after themselves they won’t. But he knew they would so he built his house called heaven. The servants of the sin built a house for evil. The devil called it HELL. The people go to hell first. Then the Lord opens the doors to heaven. The devil is trapped in hell, once he realized he can’t get to heaven.