Ted And Nat In A Black Room

• Nathanial Haigh, Grade 5
• Short Story
• 2015

Ted played outside. He fell in a mysterious hole that was big. I didn’t know where he was so l looked for him outside. I saw a big hole that Ted was in. It was too big to climb down so I told Ted I would get some rope. I went back to the hole. I used the rope to climb down. I saw a cave. We followed it to some water. We didn’t know if it was real water or fake. So we hopped in it and it was circling around us like a tornado spinning round. We went in a black room with no doors and windows.
So the water was a blank room.
Was it the end of us …?


By Nat Haigh

Note: Nathanial is a special needs student. he has written this on his own and typed it. Jessie Tame -teacher