The Hidden Treasure
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Helena Kantzavelos, Grade 3, St Spyridon College
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Short Story
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2016
Excellence Award in the 'Top Secret 2016' competition
Once upon a time there lived three little kids named Peter, Jennie and Charlie.
They were on an adventure to find the hidden treasure. Jennie’s auntie said to the children” I remembered when I was young I was looking for the hidden Treasure and I never found it.” The children went to the water well and behind the well they found a crooked stone and pulled it out and found a key.
Peter, Jennie and Charlie had lunch at Jennie’s mum’s house, after lunch they went outside to play chasey and Jennie found a trail that lead to a door. Charlie and Peter pushed the door open.
“I have never seen this before” said Jennie “let’s go inside” Said Peter
“Ok” replied Charlie “There are a lot of stairs, spider webs and spiders.”
“Look what I found, I found a door on the wall beside the stairs” whispered Charlie. “Push it “said Peter.
“What is in it” said Jennie.
“No treasure in hear” whispered peter.
“Let’s keep going tell me if you see a door “said Charlie.
“I found a door” whispered Jennie
“Is there any treasure? “Asked Peter “no but there is another door “whispered Jennie. “push it” said Charlie.” it is locked let’s use the key” whispered Peter “is there any treasure “said Charlie “YES!!!!!!!! We found the hidden treasure. “Said Jennie.