Jacks' Good Day

• Nick Banfield, Grade 1
• Short Story
• 2018

Jacks good day
1 The day of excitement
Jacks day started off very good until something that made his day even better! He found out that he was going to be famous for caching the King Rat. The King Rat was the most fearsome rat. His rat army was called “ramy” in each row of 6 they all got defeated in 1 big go! Then came the King Rat. Jack slid under the kings’ legs and scratched the king on the back.


2 the day he became famous
After the big fight Jack was huffing and puffing. So many people were shouting hooray for Jack! Then he realised that so many people wanted to pat him.

3 a long time after that
After a while Jack was very happy because of his battle. The last person to pat him was the 1 millionth. He asked himself would this ever happen again? The answer to that was no.