Echidna In Candy World

• Lindi Nguyen, Grade 4
• Short Story
• 2019

Once upon a time, Lived a echidna.The echidna lived in Tresous forest a very famous forest it is famous for its animals,lots of people hunt the animals there.One day when the echidna was sleeping a mysterious shadow came and took echidna to a place many people would want to go to....ITS CANDY LAND!!! When echidna woke up he was so surprised,it was like a DREAM echidna closed his eyes and opened it again it was REAL.A Gumby bear came up to echidna and said “hello welcome to candy land I’m Berry”echidna replied “hi I’m echidna how did I get here?”Berry. Said “secret. But I can bring u to a cabin u can live in its pretty close”.They walked along the licorice roads past the gummy post office all the way to the cotton candy cabin,”here we are, welcome to cotton candy cabin where u will be staying” said Berry “wow it’s so cool and looks fun”said echidna.They entered the cabin it was amazing it was soft comfy and definitely delicious,it was quite big everything was cotton candy even the tv isn’t that CRAZY Berry said “I will leave you here if u need my help come to the gummy bear club cabin a few blocks away” “ok” echidna replied.Echidna looked in the fridge and saw so much candy it was like a dream he grabbed a bag of sour candies and a bottle of water he found which was good because he wouldn’t enjoy sweet drinks all day after eating he went to the bedroom and went to sleep it was getting dark anyways so it was a good idea.The only thing he didn’t know was that the chocolate army snuck out of the chocolate side of candy world and went to there enemy side The gummy area.The chocolate people are a big army they have been attacking for years they are thinking to take over all of candy world.The chocolate army broke in the post office and stole all of the candy mail next they checked one of the gummy car shops and took the gummy money they left afterwards in the morning echidna heard a lot of screaming and then a knock it was Berry, echidna opened the door and Berry said “THE TOWN HAS BEEN ROBBED!”echidna said “Do you know who it is?” “I don’t know but I think it was the chocolate army because I found some chocolate drip on the road”said Berry echidna asked “who is the chocolate army?” Berry said “its are enemy from the other side of candy world. We need to get weapons and attack today” “ok” said echidna.They ran up to the secret weapon shop and asked for strong weapons the trained a little than used a rope to get across the wall.The walked quietly and attacked the chocolate people they took back the things the chocolate army has taken and ran a quick as they could when they came back everyone was relieved that the things were back.The town planned a secret party the next day.When the town thought that echidna and Berry was sleeping they prepared and when they were done everyone went to bed excited.The next day everyone prepared when Berry and echidna came out everyone jumped out and said “THANKYOU FOR SAVING THE TOWN!”Berry and echidna was so surprised after echidna asked Berry “am I going back to the forest?”Berry said “if you want to” echidna said “I want to stay! The end