Teds Story

• Ted Deabel, Grade 2
• Short Story
• 2022

Once upon a time when I was a baby I pooped but when that poo came out it changed my life. I had to wipe my fingernails because I did not have a butt or barely a body all I had was fingers and that is how i can type.

Bravo!! The crowd went wild. Next the judges said it was my turn and I started to read this story. Once upon a time I went to Southland and I was there because i was going to Totally Games. For a birthday party! Well mine actually. We played all of the games and everyone worked hard on their games because they were planning to get a Nintendo for a prize. Because they didn't get anything for me. Because they planned it when I told them they were invited. Well my birthday is tomorrow, actually tomorrow, not fake like in the story, that was ages before my day. It was the 28th October, my birthday, not anyone else's birthday. Okay fine, I will read the rest of my story. Wait, what were the rest of my story....duh duh duh!! Sorry said the electrician - what I had to do it. We got kicked out wow i knew that was really going to happen. All of the others said yeah we all knew that it was going to happen. We all went home very sad that no one got the part which made us even more sad. WE all screamed at school, it is a private school and then we walked to a park because it was the afternoon but i went straight back home and told my parents. They were very sad that I did not get the part they said go back there and show them what you got! But I just went up to my room and i just went to bed crying. I stopped crying and woke up and said what about he rest of my story I searched all around town and guess what happened? I found most of it and that was all i needed to have. I got all the kids and we went back to the audition place and they let us in and we practiced our script, our places with no break. On the last day i was so nervous and i read the last bit of my story to the judges before all the people came. they loved it and i got the main part. we all practiced our parts one last time and all the parents came in and we nailed the play. and our parents said what a beautiful play and we all went home with a lot of money. i t was awesome

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