Temple Of Death

• Aidan Milovac, Grade 4
• Short Story
• 2008

There once was a famous person named Bob. He was famous because of all the mysteries he solved like the lock nest monster, big foot and the Yeti but there was one place he had not explored. It was the temple of death. It was in the south east of Asia. The temple was in a little city named Ah. “That was a funny name!” thought Bob to himself. His friend Fee lived in Ah. As soon as he got there in a hummer helicopter he saw him running towards him. “Help!” he said. Thor, god of thunder fell down the bottomless pit of despair. “Please can you save him?” Bob thought about this, he agreed he would because he was going there. His friend said “my sons will take you in their track.” So Bob and his friend Fee climbed the side of the mountain. When bob and his friend Fee got to the top of the mountain Bob saw not a track, a rubbish track. Bob saw his three sons and Fee said “take bob to the temple of death in your track.” One of Fee’s sons picked up Bob and carried him into the track and as soon as Fee’s three sons were in the track they were off to the temple of death. When Bob was comfortable in his oldish chair he said “way is the town called Ah. It starts like this: there was a god that fell down the bottomless pit of despair and when he fell down he said ah so that’s why the town is called AH. A few seconds later they arrived at the temple of death and Bob got out of the track. Bob went to the front door but it was shut tight. There was a secret stone that led him into a secret passage that led into the temple so he started searching for the stone. He pushed the stone and the front door flow open and bob stepped inside. In the temple it was very dark except for low lines of flaming torches leading into a room. Bob walked into the room and found a map of the temple. He opened the map and saw the sword of eternal life but he had to go past the pit of despair and turn right and then he should get to the room. So Bob ran out of the room and into the main hall and ran down it. Soon he saw the pit of despair and looked down. It looked dark but when his eyes got used to the dark he saw something that looked like a gold wristband hanging on a rock in the hole. It was hanging on the rock, “I’ll come for you Thor!” “O.K” Thor shouted. So then Bob ran into the room that had the sword of eternal life in it. Bob grabbed the sword and ran out. So they were saved. By bob
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