Magic Land

• Jet Logan, Grade 2
• Short Story
• 2008

Once I was playing cricket with my friends and I hit the ball over the fence.The ball went inside an abandoned factory I went to get it and my cat Friesian followed me in there. There was a machine and there was a professor on a ladder, he fell into the machine, so Friesian and I went up totake a look and a force sucked us in.We discovered that the professor was a hologram and it wasa trick, the machine then took off to Magic Land.Friesian and I became magic, we used our powers by thinking, when we thought of something it happened. We knew we had to find the cricket ball . There were lots of demons in this land, so we had to use ourpowers to kill them. With my x- ray vision I searched for the ball and saw it in a demon’s stomach, this demon had been eaten by a demon in crocodile form, so we knew our mission would be tough.So Friesian and I used our powers to kill the crocodile demon. We sent a lightening bolt to his heart and brain and he was killed.We then sent a lightening bolt to the demon’s stomach and got thecricket ball out.With our powers we teleported back to the abandoned factory. Where we found all our friends looking for us. They were happy we were safe. Friesian’s cat friends were also happy.We began to tell our story…our friends just laughed and walked away.We tried to convince them, but they still didn’t believe us so we had no choice, we used our powers and made the cricket ball grow legs and arms. Everyone fainted and the cricket ball ran away, the cricket ball then smashed into a wall……maybe we should have also given him eyes. By Jet Logan 2C
Manly West Primary School