Magical Land

• Joy Saeed
• Short Story
• 2011

Magical Land
One day I was walking along the road, when I found a box on the ground. I was very tempted to open it. So I lifted the golden lock.

Immediately I was in this type of magical land. Right in front of me was a very narrow, long path. I walked along it till I came to an ice - cream stand. I was the man who was running it “How much does a three scoop ice - cream cost?”
“How much?!! Everything in magic land is free!!” replied the man. “Ohhhh” I said. So I got a three scoop ice - cream and went to the candyfloss stand.

I asked for some blue, red, pink and white candyfloss. Then I found a big wheel, I played on that then I went onto the Merry- go –round, it was the day of my life.

But then I thought of my Mum and Dad. They would have been pretty worried about me.

So I went on the rollercoaster and after that I got some popcorn, a bit more ice – cream and a milkshake. I wondered how to get back home then I thought of going down the path, so I did.

At the end of the path there was another box. Straight away I opened it. Finally I was.............. At my Aunt’s house!!

I was about to sit on the couch but there was a box there I opened it................... I was at my Grandfather’s apartment!! A box was on his window sill, I opened the box.

At last I was back ...................At my house!!!!!

Once my Mum saw me fireworks came out! Then I remembered what day it was, it was my B.D!! Then I knew that what I had experienced was from my Mum and Dad.

I asked “Did you do it?” they looked at each other and said “Yes” “Well thanks it was really exciting.” I said smiling
THE END